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1 Templa for s and secretariat observations Da: Document: 1 (3) 4 5 (6) (7) No on each submitd foreword Page vi, line All ge Part 4 [1] [] [3] [4] [5] [6] [7] [8] [9] [10] [11] DIS 9500 is a multi-part document, not a multi-part Standard (the individual parts this Standard are not themselves standards). The document does not make the notice in the introduction as defin in the ISO/IEC Directives, Part F The elements : linewraplikeword6 [1], mwsmallcaps [], shapelayoutlikeww8 [3], suppresstopspacingwp [4], truncafontheightslikewp6 [5], useword00tablestylerules [6], useword97linebreakrules [7], wpjustification [8], wpspacewidth [9], autospacelikeword95 [10], footnolayoutlikeww8 [11] whose are defin in rms mimicking a legacy application's behavior. The standard contains insufficient detail on how to replica this behavior. The sennce should be writn as: This Standard deals with Office Open XML Format-relad chnology Make the proper change This group elements should be more explain, describing details about how to implement it including one example for each case, and all references to mimic actions should be replac by reproduce actions defin in publicly available exrnal documents by authoritative entities for each element. By authoritative entities we mean the holder the chnical specification and/or the IPR. Part 4 It is desir to have improv inroperability among other ISO document standards. Identifi ( but not limid to) ISO 6300 attribus are : 1 MB = Member body (enr the ISO 3166 two-letr country code, e.g. CN for China; s from the ISO/CS iting unit are identifi by **) : ge = general = chnical = itorial NOTE Columns 1,, 4, 5 are compulsory. ISO electronic balloting ing mpla/version page 1 1

2 Templa for s and secretariat observations Da: Document: 1 (3) 4 5 (6) (7) No on each submitd Text blinking; Table cell proction; An option to specify "Numbers lines" for window or orphans lines; 'Manual' and 'From left' alignment in tables; Last line alignment in justifi paragraph (provision that we can change the last line the paragraph as Left, Cenr and Justify); 'Leading' line spacing in a paragraph; Tabs fill characr a paragraph; 'Title' and 'lowercase' style options; Table can have 'keep with next paragraph' set; A 'May Break Between Rows' attribu so as not to split a table; Allow entire sections to be mark as hidden; Background Image in Tables; Connts in a multi-column section can be evenly distribud resulting in balanc columns; An option to rota the xt by 90 or 70 degrees; Any number rows can be selecd for repeating Heading; Copy Heading while splitting Table; Table Shadowing Style; Vertical numbering in list ims; Image can be position absoluly within a frame; Ability to set arbitrary Text background color Before/afr xt around foot nos references, Keep ratio feature for frames, columns for frames/xt-boxes, Ability to assign to assign different page colors throught the document, No embd in xt-boxes, ability to set each 1 MB = Member body (enr the ISO 3166 two-letr country code, e.g. CN for China; s from the ISO/CS iting unit are identifi by **) : ge = general = chnical = itorial NOTE Columns 1,, 4, 5 are compulsory. ISO electronic balloting ing mpla/version page 1

3 Templa for s and secretariat observations Da: Document: 1 (3) 4 5 (6) (7) No on each submitd..1 background (Document Background)..1 background (Document Background)..1 background (Document Background) page 8, line 1 page 8, line 1 page 7, lines 8 and 1 DocumentPr oction Pg The sennce 'or auto to allow a consumer to automatically dermine the background color as appropria.' does not define the appropria behavior the consumer, whereas the definition the corresponding simple type, found in Part 4, page 1737, explicitly stas that 'This value shall be us to specify an automatically dermin color value, the meaning which is inrpr bas on the conxt the parent XML element.' The definition the themecolor attribu references the document's Theme part without properly defining it nor providing an explicit reference to the OOXML section that defines it. Contradicting use accent3 and accent5 The describ algorithms make use by-level manipulations which depend on the machine archicture (big endian versus little endian). imageborder with different properties, background opacity, 'Auto' option when application decide if a page break should be, Font weights beyond just 'normal' and 'bold', Table connt proction against annual changes, Shadow distance, and a color shadow other than black, Column separator attribus : width, color, height, vertical-align Text-box can define the vertical alignment xt(top, cenr, bottom) Change the xt to: or auto to allow a consumer to automatically dermine the background color according to section Include the reference to the Theme Part definition section in the xt: Part 1, Make the appropria corrections. 1 MB = Member body (enr the ISO 3166 two-letr country code, e.g. CN for China; s from the ISO/CS iting unit are identifi by **) : ge = general = chnical = itorial NOTE Columns 1,, 4, 5 are compulsory. ISO electronic balloting ing mpla/version Make the by ordering assumptions explicit, both for the input password and the processing sps, in order to allow cross-platform inroperability. page 3 1

4 Templa for s and secretariat observations Da: Document: 1 (3) 4 5 (6) (7) No on each submitd Part DocumentPr oction Pg The algorithm description does not specify the Unicode encoding the input password. This feature has been defin in a way which ignores the exisnce current browsers other than Inrnet Explorer. This section requires that all settings which are not compatible with the target web browser shall be disabl. These compatibility settings are only for versions Microst Word. No allowance has been made for legacy settings from other applications. Specify the Unicode encoding (e.g UTF-16BE, UTF-16LE, etc.) This im should be review concerning the use other browsers than IE. This section should make clear that all the settings are specific for Microst Office and that all other settings should use the exnsibility mechanisms describ in Part 5 this specification. Part Part Syntax.16.1 Ecma 376 section "donotleavebackslashalone" (page 180). "This element specifies whether applications should automatically convert the backslash characr into the yen characr when it is add through user keyboard input". This makes reference to dynamic behaviors that are out the scope the OOXML standard proposal. This subclause defines an INCLUDEPICTURE field which Retrieves the picture contain in the document nam. This does not define how a picture is nam. The example that illustras USERINITIALS section insad shows USERNAME. Page 1487 All field definitions from section.16.5 give no formal definition for what a field value might be. page 1487, line 3 page 1489, line The general syntax does not mention that some fields (describ in section.16.5) have specific syntax The field argument syntax does not deno that quos should be us in pairs between xt No application behaviour should be defin Use the Open Packaging Convention (Part this specification) nomenclature to define the relationships. Replace in this section the USERNAME xt by USERINITIALS in order to follow the title subject. Include in lines 17-1 a clear definition for field value. Explain in the beginning line 3 that some fields can have specific syntaxes The field argument syntax should be writn as: xt xt 1 MB = Member body (enr the ISO 3166 two-letr country code, e.g. CN for China; s from the ISO/CS iting unit are identifi by **) : ge = general = chnical = itorial NOTE Columns 1,, 4, 5 are compulsory. ISO electronic balloting ing mpla/version page 4 1

5 Templa for s and secretariat observations Da: Document: 1 (3) 4 5 (6) (7) No on each submitd Syntax.16.1 Syntax General formatting General formatting ADVANCE ADVANCE BIDIOUTLINE ASK Page 1489, line 17 The one or two Latin letrs sennce does not define clearly define what characrs to use Page 1501 The ALPHABETIC switch argument has no documend ST_NumberFormat equivalent. Page 1501 The alphabetic switch argument has no documend ST_NumberFormat equivalent. page 1509, line 14 The definition 'switches' given here contradicts the one given page 1489 lines 3-5. (Zero or more versus one or more.) Page 1510 The \d, \l, \r, \u, \x and \y switch arguments definitions refer to 'xt in this switch's field-argument' using a font that suggests that 'xt' is a structural subpart 'fieldargument' page 1510, line 3 page 1518, line page 1510, line 14 The example is not given in XML The xt A paragraph number is dubious. The 'Prompts the user to enr information ' sennce explicitly references a runtime behavior. The sennce should be writn as one or two letrs the Latin alphabet in upper or lower cases. Include the xt: Corresponds to an ST_NumberFormat enumeration value upperletr. Include the xt: Corresponds to an ST_NumberFormat enumeration value lowerletr. Make the appropria corrections Correct the xt formatting to avoid confusion (no italics). Adjust the example, showing it in XML syntax. The xt should be writn as: Numeric value representing the paragraph number. 1 MB = Member body (enr the ISO 3166 two-letr country code, e.g. CN for China; s from the ISO/CS iting unit are identifi by **) : ge = general = chnical = itorial NOTE Columns 1,, 4, 5 are compulsory. ISO electronic balloting ing mpla/version The xt should be writn as: The consumer may enr information to be assign to the bookmark designad by field-argument-1 to represent the user's response. xt in field-argument- specifies the prompt xt, which should be display in a proper input device page 5 1

6 Templa for s and secretariat observations Da: Document: 1 (3) 4 5 (6) (7) No on each submitd FILESIZE FILESIZE LISTNUM LISTNUM MERGEREC SKIPIF TEMPLATE TEMPLATE TIME page 1531, line 6 page 1531, line 7 page 1544, line page 1543, line 1 and 13 page 1546, line 17 page 1560, line 8 page 1565, line 4 page 1565, line 5 page 1565, line 18 The Retrieves verb explicitly references a runtime behavior. The sennce It nes to be obtain from the file sysm denos an specific application behavior The values given in the table make no sense. Most probably, 'iii' instances stand for 'i' instances. The definition for 'LISTNUM' is built upon the concepts 'current' or 'specific' or 'next series', which are not defin in this conxt. The sennce Results in «MERGEREC». Is meaningless. The field name writn in syntax definition is wrong The Retrieves verb explicitly references a runtime behavior. The sennce The disk file name the mpla us by the current document explicitly references a runtime behavior. The Retrieves verb explicitly references a runtime behavior. The sennce The Gregorian calendar is always us is inadequa. The xt should be writn as: The size the current document in bys. The sennce should be remov Make the appropria corrections to the table. Those concepts should be defin in the xt, and their definition should either be copi or referenc in the conxt the definition for 'LISTNUM'. Remove the sennce The field name in syntax definition should be writn as SKIPIF The xt should be writn as: The file name the mpla us by the current document. The xt should be writn as: The file name the mpla us by the current document. The xt should be writn as: The current da and time, as represend in the Gregorian calendar. 1 MB = Member body (enr the ISO 3166 two-letr country code, e.g. CN for China; s from the ISO/CS iting unit are identifi by **) : ge = general = chnical = itorial NOTE Columns 1,, 4, 5 are compulsory. ISO electronic balloting ing mpla/version page 6 1

7 Templa for s and secretariat observations Da: Document: 1 (3) 4 5 (6) (7) No on each submitd Part Part The artwork provid here is poor quality providing neither innd scale, spacing, color depth, etc. A small example diagram is an insufficient definition. Length is said to be exactly 3 characrs. This is inconsisnt with the example given which has a length 6 characrs. This type is defin as containing, a two digit hexadecimal language code. It is further stad that, This simple type's connts must have a length exactly characrs. However, two hex digits can count up to 55 and the values enumerad in this clause go far beyond that. The description this type says it contains four hexadecimal digits, four hexadecimal octs and exactly four characrs. These definitions are not compatible. A hexadecimal oct is two hexadecimal digits. Pg This section lacks normative definitions the enumeration values mention (eg. Korean Chosung Numbering). Pg Several counting sysms are defin to use letrs the alphabet, but nothing is mention about how counting continues once the letrs the alphabet are exhausd (e.g. lowerletr and upperletr). Format requires use dash to surround the number, but no indication which Unicode dash is innd. (e.g. en-dash, em-dash, hyphen-minus, figure- dash, quotation-dash, etc). Pg The formatting sysm describ here is not comprehensive, lacking, for example, support for Armenian, Tamil, Greek alphabetic, Ethiopic and Khmer numerations, all in use today, as well as the various historical sysms still us by scholars. The artworks presend should be more precise in rms definitions (scale, spacing, color, depth) This im should be review. The size this element should be review. This im should be review. Make the proper references to the normative definitions the enumeration values. Define in the specification the method to be us when the letr the alphabet are exhausd. Define the Unicode dash symbol to be us. Change to use a more flexible, exnsible, generative approach to numeration, such as that us by the W3C's XSLT specification (RFC's or STD's) in their xsl:number support Pg. 177 Format is defin in reference to the Chicago Manual Style, but no ition or page reference is provid. 1 MB = Member body (enr the ISO 3166 two-letr country code, e.g. CN for China; s from the ISO/CS iting unit are identifi by **) : ge = general = chnical = itorial NOTE Columns 1,, 4, 5 are compulsory. ISO electronic balloting ing mpla/version Either include the entire definition in the standard, or provide a proper exrnal reference. page 7 1

8 Templa for s and secretariat observations Da: Document: 1 (3) 4 5 (6) (7) No on each submitd Pg. 177 The example given does not show enclos alphanumeric glyph characrs and so contradicts the normative xt. Pg There are several mentions double-by and singleby Arabic numbering schemes. Since the conformance clause for DIS 9500 requires the use Unicode either UTF8 or UTF16 encodings, there should be no mention other encodings. No definition is provid for a Panose-1 classification a font. Length is said to be exactly 10 characrs. This is inconsisnt with the example given which has a length 0 characrs. The fill patrns lack definitions. The illustrations given are insufficient. An application nes to know what in these illustrations are requir behaviors and what are not. The description this type says it contains two hexadecimal digits, two hexadecimal octs and exactly two characrs. These definitions are not compatible. A hexadecimal oct is two hexadecimal digits. Length is said to be exactly 1 characr. This is inconsisnt with the earlier language and the schema fragment given which defines it as being 1 oct long or two characrs. Correct the example given, showing the enclos alphanumeric glyph characrs. Make references according to the conformance clause. This im should be review. This element should have more details in order to explain how to implement it. This im should be review. This im should be review. Part 4 The conversion from input password to single by string is ambiguous. Certainly the input password could contain This im should define the encoding, and has to characrs from more than one script, say some Korean, 3..9 describe how to deal with scripts from different some Chinese. languages such as (but not limid to) Korean or No normative description the password hashing Armenian. algorithm is provid, so inroperability this feature This description should be more well explain, cannot be assum. In an informative section, 5-pages and the example should be done in a different way C-language source code is provid as an example, with independence machine or OS. and this appears to involve machine-dependent bit manipulations. procdra No normative description the password hashing Provide a normative, cross-platform definition 1 MB = Member body (enr the ISO 3166 two-letr country code, e.g. CN for China; s from the ISO/CS iting unit are identifi by **) : ge = general = chnical = itorial NOTE Columns 1,, 4, 5 are compulsory. ISO electronic balloting ing mpla/version page 8 1

9 Templa for s and secretariat observations Da: Document: 1 (3) 4 5 (6) (7) No on each submitd nge Pg Das and Times procdra nge Pg. 004 xtpr Pg. 471 page 5, lines 7 and 8 algorithm is provid, only an example is given. The inroperability this feature cannot be assum. The securitydescriptor attribu, defines user accounts who may it this range without providing a password to access the range, but no information is given as to what user accounts are referr to here, or what the delimir is. The values for the codepage attribu are presend only as an example list. There is not a normative reference for the valid code pages. The sennce As das and times are numeric 8 values, they can take part in arithmetic operations. might be misleading since arithmetics on das and times can result ill-form values Pg. 5 The restriction to only two da bases limits the range serial das starting from , limiting the representation historical das. ST_File pg. 859 This element defines values for use on Windows and Macintosh platforms, but not for any other operating sysms. Length is said to be exactly 4 characrs. This is inconsisnt with the schema fragment given which defines it as being 4 octs long or 8 characrs. Length is said to be exactly characrs. This is inconsisnt with the schema fragment given which defines it as being octs long or 4 characrs. Length is said to be exactly 3 characrs. This is inconsisnt with the schema fragment given which defines it as being 3 octs long or 6 characrs. This type is us in only two places, and , in both cases to represent an RGB color value. Since you already have defin a ST_HexColorRGB type that should be us. the hashing algorithm. Substitu user accounts with a more generic account (e.g. security account), and define this account, in order to provide cross platform implementation. Make the proper normative reference to the code pages standard. The sennce should be remov or be writn as: As das and times are numeric 8 values, they can take part in arithmetic operations. Arithmetic operations on das and times can result ill-form values. Allow a range other declar da bases or allow explicitly negative da serial values to express das prior to Define values to allow cross platform inroperability. This im should be review. This im should be review. This im should be review. 1 MB = Member body (enr the ISO 3166 two-letr country code, e.g. CN for China; s from the ISO/CS iting unit are identifi by **) : ge = general = chnical = itorial NOTE Columns 1,, 4, 5 are compulsory. ISO electronic balloting ing mpla/version page 9 1

10 Templa for s and secretariat observations Da: Document: 1 (3) 4 5 (6) (7) No on each submitd Length is said to be exactly 10 characrs. This is inconsisnt with the schema fragment given which defines it as being 10 octs long. No font distance metric or font matching heuristic is describ. No mention is made what audio formats or codecs are permitd. This describes the attachment a QuickTime video to a presentation object. No description the QuickTime format is provid. Without specifying a version and suppord codecs, there will be no inroperability. This im should be review. This im should be review considering inroperability and flexibility. This im should describe the suppord codecs and version the Quicktime arc arc (Arc Segment) Part Part page 435 The description the 'dgmlayout' attribu stas that 'The possible values for this attribu are defin by the XML Schema inger datatype', while the precing description only assigns meanings to the 0, 1, and 3 values. page 4393 ge The Cascading Style Sheets, Level specification is defin by an exrnal document. This describes the "equationxml" attribu "shape" elements, "us to rehydra an equation using the Office Open XML Math syntax". However, the "actual format the connts this attribu are application-defin", which makes them impossible to exchange between applications. If we're going to have a new math markup language in XML, and ignore the existing MathML, let's at least use the new markup in its elemental form, as wellform XML (not stuff into an attribu value), and without exnding it in application-dependent ways. Describes a "gfxdata" attribu for the "shape" elements, which "contains DrawingML connt" that is "base-64 encod". However, the "connts this package are application-defin", so even though they "shall use the Parts defin by this Standard whenever possible" there Make the proper change 1 MB = Member body (enr the ISO 3166 two-letr country code, e.g. CN for China; s from the ISO/CS iting unit are identifi by **) : ge = general = chnical = itorial NOTE Columns 1,, 4, 5 are compulsory. ISO electronic balloting ing mpla/version The reference should be remov from this section and a proper reference should e includ in Part 1, A. Bibliography. This element attribu should be clearly defin or remov from this document. This element attribu should be clearly defin or remov from this document. page 10 1

11 Templa for s and secretariat observations Da: Document: 1 (3) 4 5 (6) (7) No on each submitd Part Part and Part Part Pg Pg. 497 is not sufficient information for an independent implementation to read this data or display the "DrawingML connt" contain therein. If we're going to have a new graphics markup language in XML, and ignore the existing SVG, let's at least use the new markup in its elemental form, as well-form XML (not stuff into an attribu value), and without exnding it in applicationdependent ways. This describes an "ink" element which stores "ink annotations in an application-defin format." This is apparently innd to store annotations, us with tablet input devices to add hand-writn annotations to documents. These annotations are n a vital part documents and their specification is undefin in OOXML. We are oppos to standardizing placeholder elements for entirely application- dependent proprietary formats without also specifying an inroperable format for those who with to crea inroperable formats. The allow values this enumeration, EMF, WMF, etc., are Windows specific formats. No allowance seems to have been made for use by other operating sysms. Pg. 51 The presence non-xml characrs, escap, or not escap in an OOXML document, is contrary to inroperability XML and XML-bas tools. Pg. 51 This element defines values for use on Windows and Macintosh platforms, but not for any other operating sysms. This element attribu should be clearly defin or remov from this document. Allow full cross platform inroperability to formats that are us by other operating sysms (e.g. PNG, OGG, etc.). The W3C's Inrnationalization stas Control codes should be replac with appropria markup.. The bstr type should be revis and the control codes that demands this data type should be properly converd to XML, bas on the OPC- Open Package Convention specification. Define values to allow cross platform inroperability. Pg. 51 There is not enough information given to achieve inroperability (e.g. the allow values and meanings for Clarify the meanings and values the rms a built-in Windows clipboard format value are not us. presend). Pg. 51 The value -3 specifies a GUID that contains a format Specify GUID and FMTID. 1 MB = Member body (enr the ISO 3166 two-letr country code, e.g. CN for China; s from the ISO/CS iting unit are identifi by **) : ge = general = chnical = itorial NOTE Columns 1,, 4, 5 are compulsory. ISO electronic balloting ing mpla/version page 11 1

12 Templa for s and secretariat observations Da: Document: 1 (3) 4 5 (6) (7) No on each submitd identifier (FMTID). The requir format for neither a GUID nor a FMTID is specifi stringsasnul l Pg. 51 The usage null-rminad C- style strings is avoiding XML and will cause the markup to inropera poorly with XML-bas tools Pg The Compatibility Settings are not available to understand how the document is render. Rewri the clause to express this feature in an application and platform independent way. The references in the Compatibility Settings section should be made to full publicly available information. 1 MB = Member body (enr the ISO 3166 two-letr country code, e.g. CN for China; s from the ISO/CS iting unit are identifi by **) : ge = general = chnical = itorial NOTE Columns 1,, 4, 5 are compulsory. ISO electronic balloting ing mpla/version page 1 1