Personal Narrative READING-WRITING WORKSHOP Theme 1, Grade 3 Reading Standards for Informational Text RI.3.7: Integration of Knowledge and Ideas Use information gained from illustrations and the words in a text to demonstrate understanding of the text. Reading Standards for Informational Text RI.3.8: Integration of Knowledge and Ideas Describe the logical connection between particular sentences and paragraphs in a text (comparison, cause/effect, first/second/third in a sequence). Sacramento County Office of Education 1
Writing Standards W.3.3: Text Types and Purposes Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, descriptive details, and clear event sequences. a. Establish a situation and introduce a narrator and/or characters; organize an event sequence that unfolds naturally. Writing Standards W.3.3: Text Types and Purposes Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, descriptive details, and clear event sequences. b. Use dialogue and descriptions of actions, thoughts, and feelings to develop experiences and events or show the response of characters to situations. c. Use temporal words and phrases to signal event order. d. Provide a sense of closure. Writing Standards W.3.5: Production and Distribution of Writing With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, and editing. (Editing for conventions should demonstrate command of Language strand.) Sacramento County Office of Education 2
Speaking and Listening Standards SL.3.4: Presentation of Knowledge and Ideas Report on a topic or text, tell a story, or recount an experience with appropriate facts and relevant, descriptive details, speaking clearly at an understandable pace. Language Standards L.3.2: Conventions of Standard English Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English capitalization, punctuation, and spelling when writing. f. Use conventional spelling for high frequency and other studied words and for adding suffixes to base words (e.g., sitting, smiled, cries, happiness). Language Standards L.3.2: Conventions of Standard English Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English capitalization, punctuation, and spelling when writing. g. Use spelling patterns and generalizations (e.g., word families, position-based spellings, syllable patterns, ending rules, meaningful word parts) in writing words. Sacramento County Office of Education 3
What Makes a Great Personal Narrative? A personal narrative is a true story about something that happened to the person telling the story. When you write a personal narrative use I grab your reader s attention at the beginning. included only the important events tell the events in order When you write a personal narrative used details and keep to the topic include dialogue when appropriate write in your own voice end in a way that finishes the story. Sacramento County Office of Education 4
Reading as a Writer How does the beginning make you want to find out what the personal narrative is about? Who is the I of this essay? What details does the author give to make this interesting? Reading as a Writer What is the topic of the personal narrative? In what ways does the author show that she is keeping to this topic? Choosing a Topic Who is the audience for your personal narrative: a friend? students your age? teachers and other adults? Sacramento County Office of Education 5
Choosing a Topic What is your purpose for writing: to inform? to entertain? Choosing a Topic How do you plan to publish your personal narrative: in a book or magazine form? on a display in the classroom? as an e-mail message over the internet? Ideas for Personal Narratives What are some interesting things that have happened to you lately? What are some adventures you have had in your life? What is a memorable experiences that you have had? Sacramento County Office of Education 6
Organizing and Planning Begin by capturing the reader s attention in an unusual way. Stay focused on your topic. Don t assume that the reader knows what you know. Organizing and Planning Download this graphic organizer at www.curriculumcompanion.org Drafting Writing a Good Beginning ask a question describe a feeling or a vivid scene show action present a problem or mystery use dialogue throw the reader into the middle of an interesting situation Sacramento County Office of Education 7
Drafting Keeping to the Topic Every paragraph and sentence provides one of two functions. It provides information about what happened. It must enrich the narrative in some way by making it funny, more interesting or more meaningful. Revising Sentence Combining Combine actions people things descriptions details The boy is being silly. The boy is wearing a hat. The boy is being silly and wearing a hat. Proofreading Checking your work Capitalization Is the first word of every sentence capitalized? Punctuation Does each sentence end with a punctuation mark? Spelling Did you double check any words that you were unsure of? Sacramento County Office of Education 8
Publishing and Evaluating Student Self-Assessment What part of your personal narrative did you like best? What parts did your readers like best? What were the best descriptions in your narrative? Publishing and Evaluating Student Self-Assessment Did you meet the goals that you set for your narrative? Explain If you were to rewrite this narrative, how would you write it differently? How will writing this change the next thing you write? Sacramento County Office of Education 9