English I. Short Answer Single Selection Scoring Guide. March 2015

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1 English I Short Answer Single Selection Scoring Guide Copyright 2015,. All rights reserved. Reproduction of all or portions of this work is prohibited without express written permission from Texas Education Agency.

2 STAAR English I Single Selection Score Point 0 Insufficient Response to the Question Insufficient responses indicate a very limited reading performance. These responses have one of the following problems. The idea is not an answer to the question asked. The idea is incorrect because it is not based on the text. The idea is too general, vague, or unclear to determine whether it is reasonable. No idea is present. Sometimes the response contains only text evidence. At other times there appears to be an idea; however, this idea cannot be considered an answer to the question because it merely repeats verbatim, or echoes, the text evidence.

3 STAAR English I Single Selection Score Point 1 Partially Sufficient Response to the Question Partially sufficient responses indicate a basic reading performance. These responses have one of the following characteristics. The idea is reasonable, but the response contains no text evidence. The idea is reasonable, but the text evidence is flawed and does not adequately support the idea. Text evidence is considered inadequate when it is only a general reference to the text, too partial to support the idea, weakly linked to the idea, or used inappropriately because it wrongly manipulates the meaning of the text. The idea needs more explanation or specificity even though it is supported with text evidence. The idea represents only a literal reading of the text, with or without text evidence.

4 STAAR English I Single Selection Score Point 2 Sufficient Response to the Question Sufficient responses indicate a satisfactory reading performance. These responses have the following characteristics. The idea is reasonable and goes beyond a literal reading of the text. It is explained specifically enough to show that the student can make appropriate connections across the text and draw valid conclusions. The text evidence used to support the idea is accurate and relevant. The idea and text evidence used to support it are clearly linked. The combination of the idea and the text evidence demonstrates a good understanding of the text.

5 STAAR English I Single Selection Score Point 3 Exemplary Response to the Question Exemplary responses indicate an accomplished reading performance. These responses have the following characteristics. The idea is perceptive and reflects an awareness of the complexities of the text. The student is able to develop a coherent explanation of the idea by making discerning connections across the text. The text evidence used to support the idea is specific and well chosen. Overall, the evidence strongly supports the validity of the idea. The combination of the idea and the text evidence demonstrates a deep understanding of the text.

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7 English I Short Answer Connecting Selections Scoring Guide Copyright 2015,. All rights reserved. Reproduction of all or portions of this work is prohibited without express written permission from Texas Education Agency.

8 STAAR English I Connecting Selections Score Point 0 Insufficient Response to the Question Insufficient responses indicate a very limited reading performance. These responses have one of the following problems. For one or both selections, the idea is not an answer to the question asked. The idea is incorrect because it is not based on one or both selections. For one or both selections, the idea is too general, vague, or unclear to determine whether it is reasonable. No idea is present from either selection. Sometimes the response contains only text evidence from one or both selections. At other times there appears to be an idea; however, this idea cannot be considered an answer to the question because it merely repeats verbatim, or echoes, the text evidence.

9 STAAR English I Connecting Selections Score Point 1 Partially Sufficient Response to the Question Partially sufficient responses indicate a basic reading performance. These responses have one of the following characteristics. The idea is reasonable for both selections, but the response contains no text evidence (from one or both selections). The idea is reasonable for both selections, but the text evidence (from one or both selections) is flawed and does not adequately support the idea. Text evidence is considered inadequate when it is only a general reference to the text, too partial to support the idea, weakly linked to the idea, or used inappropriately because it wrongly manipulates the meaning of the text. For one or both selections, the idea needs more explanation or specificity even though it is supported with text evidence from both selections. For one or both selections, the idea represents only a literal reading of the text, with or without text evidence (from one or both selections). The response contains relevant textual evidence from both selections, but the student offers an idea that is reasonable for only one selection. The response contains an idea and relevant text evidence for both selections, but the idea for one selection contains an inaccuracy.

10 STAAR English I Connecting Selections Score Point 2 Sufficient Response to the Question Sufficient responses indicate a satisfactory reading performance. These responses have the following characteristics. For both selections, the idea is reasonable and goes beyond a literal reading of the text. It is explained specifically enough to show that the student can make appropriate connections across the selections and draw valid conclusions. For both selections, the text evidence that is used to support the idea is accurate and relevant. For both selections, the idea and text evidence used to support it are clearly linked. For both selections, the combination of the idea and the text evidence demonstrates a good understanding of the text.

11 STAAR English I Connecting Selections Score Point 3 Exemplary Response to the Question Exemplary responses indicate an accomplished reading performance. These responses have the following characteristics. For both selections, the idea is perceptive and reflects an awareness of the complexities of the text. The student is able to develop a coherent explanation of the idea by making discerning connections across both selections. For both selections, the text evidence that is used to support the idea is specific and well chosen. Overall, the evidence strongly supports the validity of the idea. For both selections, the combination of the idea and the text evidence demonstrates a deep understanding of the text.

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13 English I Expository Scoring Guide Copyright 2015,. All rights reserved. Reproduction of all or portions of this work is prohibited without express written permission from Texas Education Agency.

14 STAAR English I Expository Score Point 1 The essay represents a very limited writing performance. Organization/Progression The organizing structure of the essay is inappropriate to the purpose or the specific demands of the prompt. The writer uses organizational strategies that are only marginally suited to the explanatory task, or they are inappropriate or not evident at all. The absence of a functional organizational structure causes the essay to lack clarity and direction. Most ideas are generally related to the topic specified in the prompt, but the thesis statement is missing, unclear, or illogical. The writer may fail to maintain focus on the topic, may include extraneous information, or may shift abruptly from idea to idea, weakening the coherence of the essay. The writer s progression of ideas is weak. Repetition or wordiness sometimes causes serious disruptions in the flow of the essay. At other times the lack of transitions and sentence-to-sentence connections causes the writer to present ideas in a random or illogical way, making one or more parts of the essay unclear or difficult to follow. Development of Ideas The development of ideas is weak. The essay is ineffective because the writer uses details and examples that are inappropriate, vague, or insufficient. The essay is insubstantial because the writer s response to the prompt is vague or confused. In some cases, the essay as a whole is only weakly linked to the prompt. In other cases, the writer develops the essay in a manner that demonstrates a lack of understanding of the expository writing task. Use of Language/Conventions The writer s word choice may be vague or limited. It reflects little or no awareness of the expository purpose and does not establish a tone appropriate to the task. The word choice may impede the quality and clarity of the essay. Sentences are simplistic, awkward, or uncontrolled, significantly limiting the effectiveness of the essay. The writer has little or no command of sentence boundaries and spelling, capitalization, punctuation, grammar, and usage conventions. Serious and persistent errors create disruptions in the fluency of the writing and sometimes interfere with meaning.

15 STAAR English I Expository Score Point 2 The essay represents a basic writing performance. Organization/Progression The organizing structure of the essay is evident but may not always be appropriate to the purpose or the specific demands of the prompt. The essay is not always clear because the writer uses organizational strategies that are only somewhat suited to the expository task. Most ideas are generally related to the topic specified in the prompt, but the writer s thesis statement is weak or somewhat unclear. The lack of an effective thesis or the writer s inclusion of irrelevant information interferes with the focus and coherence of the essay. The writer s progression of ideas is not always logical and controlled. Sometimes repetition or wordiness causes minor disruptions in the flow of the essay. At other times transitions and sentence-to-sentence connections are too perfunctory or weak to support the flow of the essay or show the relationships among ideas. Development of Ideas The development of ideas is minimal. The essay is superficial because the writer uses details and examples that are not always appropriate or are too briefly or partially presented. The essay reflects little or no thoughtfulness. The writer s response to the prompt is sometimes formulaic. The writer develops the essay in a manner that demonstrates only a limited understanding of the expository writing task. Use of Language/Conventions The writer s word choice may be general or imprecise. It reflects a basic awareness of the expository purpose but does little to establish a tone appropriate to the task. The word choice may not contribute to the quality and clarity of the essay. Sentences are awkward or only somewhat controlled, weakening the effectiveness of the essay. The writer demonstrates a partial command of sentence boundaries and spelling, capitalization, punctuation, grammar, and usage conventions. Some distracting errors may be evident, at times creating minor disruptions in the fluency or meaning of the writing.

16 STAAR English I Expository Score Point 3 The essay represents a satisfactory writing performance. Organization/Progression The organizing structure of the essay is, for the most part, appropriate to the purpose and responsive to the specific demands of the prompt. The essay is clear because the writer uses organizational strategies that are adequately suited to the expository task. The writer establishes a clear thesis statement. Most ideas are related to the thesis and are focused on the topic specified in the prompt. The essay is coherent, though it may not always be unified due to minor lapses in focus. The writer s progression of ideas is generally logical and controlled. For the most part, transitions are meaningful, and sentence-to-sentence connections are sufficient to support the flow of the essay and show the relationships among ideas. Development of Ideas The development of ideas is sufficient because the writer uses details and examples that are specific and appropriate, adding some substance to the essay. The essay reflects some thoughtfulness. The writer s response to the prompt is original rather than formulaic. The writer develops the essay in a manner that demonstrates a good understanding of the expository writing task. Use of Language/Conventions The writer s word choice is, for the most part, clear and specific. It reflects an awareness of the expository purpose and establishes a tone appropriate to the task. The word choice usually contributes to the quality and clarity of the essay. Sentences are varied and adequately controlled, for the most part contributing to the effectiveness of the essay. The writer demonstrates an adequate command of sentence boundaries and spelling, capitalization, punctuation, grammar, and usage conventions. Although some errors may be evident, they create few (if any) disruptions in the fluency of the writing, and they do not affect the clarity of the essay.

17 STAAR English I Expository Score Point 4 The essay represents an accomplished writing performance. Organization/Progression The organizing structure of the essay is clearly appropriate to the purpose and responsive to the specific demands of the prompt. The essay is skillfully crafted because the writer uses organizational strategies that are particularly well suited to the expository task. The writer establishes a clear thesis statement. All ideas are strongly related to the thesis and are focused on the topic specified in the prompt. By sustaining this focus, the writer is able to create an essay that is unified and coherent. The writer s progression of ideas is logical and well controlled. Meaningful transitions and strong sentence-to-sentence connections enhance the flow of the essay by clearly showing the relationships among ideas, making the writer s train of thought easy to follow. Development of Ideas The development of ideas is effective because the writer uses details and examples that are specific and well chosen, adding substance to the essay. The essay is thoughtful and engaging. The writer may choose to use his/her unique experiences or view of the world as a basis for writing or to connect ideas in interesting ways. The writer develops the essay in a manner that demonstrates a thorough understanding of the expository writing task. Use of Language/Conventions The writer s word choice is purposeful and precise. It reflects a keen awareness of the expository purpose and maintains a tone appropriate to the task. The word choice strongly contributes to the quality and clarity of the essay. Sentences are purposeful, varied, and well controlled, enhancing the effectiveness of the essay. The writer demonstrates a consistent command of sentence boundaries and spelling, capitalization, punctuation, grammar, and usage conventions. Although minor errors may be evident, they do not detract from the fluency of the writing or the clarity of the essay. The overall strength of the conventions contributes to the effectiveness of the essay.