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PEER REVIEW HISTORY BMJ Open publishes all reviews undertaken for accepted manuscripts. Reviewers are asked to complete a checklist review form (http://bmjopen.bmj.com/site/about/resources/checklist.pdf) and are provided with free text boxes to elaborate on their assessment. These free text comments are reproduced below. ARTICLE DETAILS TITLE (PROVISIONAL) AUTHORS Code blue: methodology for a qualitative study of teamwork during simulated cardiac arrest Clarke, Samuel; Apesoa-Varano, Ester; Barton, Joseph VERSION 1 - REVIEW REVIEWER REVIEW RETURNED Saket Girotra University of Iowa, Iowa City, IA United States 04-Aug-2015 GENERAL COMMENTS This is an elegantly designed study that focuses on enhancing our understanding of organizational, interpersonal, cognitive, and behavioral dimensions of in-hospital cardiac arrest resuscitation with the goal of improving code team functioning. The investigators have proposed to analyze videos from mock codes and conduct focus group interviews with physicians, nurses, respiratory therapists, and pharmacists to determine their knowledge, interpersonal interactions with other team members, communication, and elicit their perceptions related to different aspects of resuscitation performance. The rationale for this study is compelling. Although I am unable to judge the qualitative methods since that is not an area of my expertise, the approach used by the investigators is novel. I believe the findings from this study could be helpful in designing conceptual models for team building and improvement. The use of simulation instead of actual codes will be a limitation. Although the authors acknowledge this as a limitation and I recognize the logistic constraints related to video recording mock codes due to the issues of unpredictability and patient privacy, I do think their study will be strengthened if actual codes could be included. Overall, this is a well-written manuscript and I will look forward to the results. REVIEWER REVIEW RETURNED Elizabeth Lazzara Embry Riddle United States of America 13-Oct-2015 GENERAL COMMENTS I commend the authors on their extensive work in such an important area; however, I do not feel that the manuscript in its current state is suitable for publication. I have divided my comments into major and minor. See below for additional details. Major

1. The objectives mentioned on page 6...1) to describe practitioners experiences of code blue events and their selfperceptions of knowledge and skills in cardiac arrest, 2) to describe practitioners views of teamwork, with a focus on roles, communication, and coordination of cardiac arrest response, and 3) to identify organizational factors in order to improve cardiac arrest resuscitation training, teamwork and patient care don t actually align with the rest of the paper as the authors do not actually describe the practitioners experiences and perceptions of events or their views on teamwork. Additionally, the authors do not actually identify the the organizational factors. 2. Actual teamwork as well as perceptions of teamwork are likely different in simulated codes compared to actual codes. Although the authors began to make a case for the use of simulation; I think the authors need to make a stronger case for why simulated mock codes are more appropriate for understanding teamwork and organizational factors contributing to resuscitations compared to actual, live codes. 3. The methodology of the coding matrix and the coding matrix itself needs significantly more elaboration. Currently, there is not enough information for other researchers to replicate the study. The minimal method leaves many questions unanswered - how explicitly did the authors arrive at this tool? Why were these categories included as opposed to others? Is this tool valid? What is the theoretical basis of this tool? How is this tool used (e.g., should one use hash marks or textual responses to complete the tool?) When should this tool be used (e.g., during simulated codes? live codes? both?) How are team members differentiated within the tool? 4. My final and perhaps my most critical concern is that the contribution of this paper is substantially lacking. Presently, the paper describes coding videos and conducting focus groups; however, those methods are not unique and innovative enough to warrant publication without data. The reader is left wondering what the results of this study were. I would encourage the authors to revise the manuscript and include the results of this study. Minor Comments 1. There are typos within the document that need to be rectified. 2. Some of the transitions between paragraphs could be a bit smoother for the reader. For example, the first paragraph in the introduction describes patient s survival and teamwork involved in inhospital cardiac resuscitations and the second paragraph is describing the frequencies. If those transitions were smoother, that would make it easier for the reader to follow. 3. The authors mention that human factors may be at play. Is human factors the phrase the authors intended to use? Human Factors is a division of psychology that studies the interaction between humans and systems to better outcomes related to design, efficiency, safety, etc. Human Factors is not synonymous with individual differences - the characteristics within individuals that impact processes and outcomes. 4. The authors need to make the connection clearer that infrequent events warrant more frequent training. I do not necessarily disagree, but why is this the case? 5. Did the authors intend to use the term highly reliable teams? I think what was intended was high reliability teams. 6. What is meant by sociological processes? The authors need to be explicit on what processes they are referencing. If the processes are related to teamwork, I would recommend the authors rephrase the statement that previous work has not looked at teamwork within

resuscitations. For example, Anderssen et al 2011 identified nontechnical skills for teamwork in interdisciplinary cardiac teams using qualitative methods. Allan et al 2010 developed a simulation course with resuscitation scenarios and evaluated both technical skills and performance as well as team function. In fact, Allan et al s study included physicians, nurses, respiratory technicians, and nurse practitioners. VERSION 1 AUTHOR RESPONSE Major Comments 1. The objectives mentioned on page 6...1) to describe practitioners experiences of code blue events and their self-perceptions of knowledge and skills in cardiac arrest, 2) to describe practitioners views of teamwork, with a focus on roles, communication, and coordination of cardiac arrest response, and 3) to identify organizational factors in order to improve cardiac arrest resuscitation training, teamwork and patient care don t actually align with the rest of the paper as the authors do not actually describe the practitioners experiences and perceptions of events or their views on teamwork. Additionally, the authors do not actually identify the organizational factors. Authors: Our study relies on two qualitative data collection techniques (field observation and participant interviews) that are intended to be complementary, and they allow for data triangulation in order to identify points of congruence and contradictions (e.g. between what individuals say versus what individuals do). The focus group interviews follow a semi-structured format in which the major topics of interest are pre-defined but intentionally open-ended so that emergent themes or topics that may be relevant to the research questions can be explored. The interview guide describes each of the lines of inquiry pursued in the focus groups: background and prior training in cardiac arrest; perceptions of teamwork, division of labor, and customs of communication in cardiac arrest events; quality and culture of training for cardiac arrest; and perceived areas in need of improvement. We believe this structure will allow us to address the major objectives outlined above. Our field observations, which consist of detailed analysis of Mock Code events, are intended to provide a means of triangulation with findings from the focus groups, and to generate additional hypotheses as to the organizational, educational, and communication and patient care-related factors at play. This is an inductive process based on grounded theory, and consistent with this approach we do not presume to know these factors at the outset of the study. Given that we are presenting the methodological approach to our study and not its findings and conclusions (this being a submission to the methods section of the journal), the results of our data collection belong to a subsequent manuscript. 2. Actual teamwork as well as perceptions of teamwork are likely different in simulated codes compared to actual codes. Although the authors began to make a case for the use of simulation; I think the authors need to make a stronger case for why simulated mock codes are more appropriate for understanding teamwork and organizational factors contributing to resuscitations compared to actual, live codes. Authors: This is a significant issue, and we are glad that our reviewer has raised it. While it would be ideal to directly observe team interactions (either in person or via recording) for actual Code Blue events, their relative infrequency, unpredictability, and the medico-legal implications of critical patient care make such a strategy impractical. Rather than simply relying on providers recollections of their experiences in cardiac arrest resuscitations, we have sought to recreate the conditions of cardiac arrest resuscitation with as high a degree of fidelity as possible. The simulations are carried out in actual patient care spaces within the hospital and are responded to by all of the providers who would

manage an actual Code Blue. The Codes are announced via overhead page, and responding staff have no prior warning of the event aside from the staff member playing the primary nurse (who is provided with a brief orientation immediately prior to the scenario). We believe that the unannounced nature of these simulations and their placement in realistic healthcare settings allows us to recreate the psychological as well as physical conditions of cardiac arrest response in the hospital setting. 3. The methodology of the coding matrix and the coding matrix itself needs significantly more elaboration. Currently, there is not enough information for other researchers to replicate the study. The minimal method leaves many questions unanswered - how explicitly did the authors arrive at this tool? Why were these categories included as opposed to others? Is this tool valid? What is the theoretical basis of this tool? How is this tool used (e.g., should one use hash marks or textual responses to complete the tool?) When should this tool be used (e.g., during simulated codes? live codes? both?) How are team members differentiated within the tool? Authors: We would like to thank our reviewers for pointing out the need for further explanation of our instrument development. We have addressed these questions in the revised manuscript on pages 8-10. 4. My final and perhaps my most critical concern is that the contribution of this paper is substantially lacking. Presently, the paper describes coding videos and conducting focus groups; however, those methods are not unique and innovative enough to warrant publication without data. The reader is left wondering what the results of this study were. I would encourage the authors to revise the manuscript and include the results of this study. Authors: We feel that our methodological approach provides two substantial contributions which are innovative and might prove useful to other researchers. While the use of video coding and focus groups are commonly used qualitative techniques, their application to cardiac arrest resuscitation is unique. Qualitative studies are vanishingly rare in the cardiac arrest literature, and most have focused emotional aspects of the experience (e.g. family members experiences) rather than the mechanics of the team s efforts toward resuscitation itself. The use of simulation as one of the substrates for data collection is also unique and may serve as inspiration for other qualitative and mixed-methods investigators seeking to understand similarly complex and difficult-to-access phenomena in the healthcare setting. We believe these two contributions merit detailed description in the form of a methods manuscript. Minor Comments 1. There are typos within the document that need to be rectified. 2. Some of the transitions between paragraphs could be a bit smoother for the reader. For example, the first paragraph in the introduction describes patient s survival and teamwork involved in in-hospital cardiac resuscitations and the second paragraph is describing the frequencies. If those transitions were smoother, that would make it easier for the reader to follow. 3. The authors mention that human factors may be at play. Is human factors the phrase the authors intended to use? Human Factors is a division of psychology that studies the interaction between humans and systems to better outcomes related to design, efficiency, safety, etc. Human Factors is not synonymous with individual differences - the characteristics within individuals that impact processes and outcomes. 4. The authors need to make the connection clearer that infrequent events warrant more frequent training. I do not necessarily disagree, but why is this the case? 5. Did the authors intend to use the term highly reliable teams? I think what was intended was high reliability teams.

6. What is meant by sociological processes? The authors need to be explicit on what processes they are referencing. If the processes are related to teamwork, I would recommend the authors rephrase the statement that previous work has not looked at teamwork within resuscitations. For example, Anderssen et al 2011 identified nontechnical skills for teamwork in interdisciplinary cardiac teams using qualitative methods. Allan et al 2010 developed a simulation course with resuscitation scenarios and evaluated both technical skills and performance as well as team function. In fact, Allan et al s study included physicians, nurses, respiratory technicians, and nurse practitioners. Authors: We have addressed each of these concerns in the body of the revised manuscript. In regards to comment 6, while the two references mentioned by our reviewer do relate to the study of resuscitation teamwork using simulation, we would like to point out that neither uses qualitative methodology to do so. VERSION 2 REVIEW REVIEWER REVIEW RETURNED Elizabeth Lazzara Embry Riddle, United States 08-Dec-2015 GENERAL COMMENTS I appreciate the authors taking the time to address the reviewer comments. I, unfortunately, still have concerns. My response to their revised manuscript is below. 1. I agree with the authors response that the methods they employed would be able to answer the objectives. However, because this manuscript does not contain data, the objectives are not describing experiences, describing teamwork, and identifying organizational factors. Rather, the objectives of this paper are actually describing methods that could answer these objectives. If the authors adhere to excluding data, I would suggest that the objectives be revised such that they are more accurate describing methods and not describing the experiences. 2. Regarding the use of simulation, the authors bring up good points within their response letter. I think these points should be included within the manuscript to better argue why simulation is appropriate. 3. I commend the authors for providing additional details regarding the coding matrix. However, there are still some concerns/questions. The development and how to complete the tool is still unclear. Also, the authors indicated that the theoretical basis for the teamwork portion of the matrix is crisis resource management, but CRM is not a theory. It is a training program. Finally, the specifics regarding the reliability and validity remain missing. 4. I concur with the authors that their approach has merit, but I still contend that the contribution of this paper needs the results of the study. VERSION 2 AUTHOR RESPONSE 1. We have described the objectives of our overall study, the methods for which are reported in this manuscript. We feel that altering these objectives would obscure the true intent of the study. As a protocol manuscript, we feel that it is more accurate to describe the objectives of the study (which will span both the methods and the results) rather than just the methods as our reviewer suggests. If the editors interpret this issue differently, we are happy to adjust this language accordingly.

2. We have expanded on the rationale supporting in situ simulation of Code Blue events (as opposed to real Code Blue events) per our reviewer's suggestion. This additional language can be found in the Discussion section. 3. We feel that we have adequately described the development of the coding matrix and the way that it is used in the study. If the editors feel that further description is warranted, we would appreciate direction on what specifically should be provided. We contend that Crisis Resource Management (CRM) is not, in fact, a training program as has been suggested by our reviewer. It is a framework for describing the essential cognitive and communication activities common to dynamic, time-dependent, high-stakes events which require multiple people to manage. As a set of concepts derived from a discipline entirely distinct from medicine (civilian aviation, in which it was originally termed "Crew Resource Management") and subsequently translated to healthcare, we view it firmly as a theoretical framework. Furthermore, it has been applied in multiple, distinct healthcare settings (Operating Room, Emergency Department) which require very different training programs. Again, we would like to thank both the editors and our reviewer for their attention to our manuscript. We are honored to have it published in your journal, and are happy to work with the editorial staff to make any additional adjustments they feel are necessary.