experience. He should use experience in the form of noun because many is always followed The student made errors in using the words

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2 1. I had many experienced when I joined in IC students, for example I could get many friends from IC and the other from out IC When I joind in the class to learnt, our teacher usually did something for us. 3. I proud of my lecturers because of them made us happy to learn anything. 4. I am writing about my experienced in my class and around of it On this composition I am writing about my new experiences that I have never gotten before I joined in the IC classes. 2. This experience makes me satisfy become an IC student. TABLE OF DATA ANALYSIS The student made errors in using the words experience. He should use experience in the form of noun because many is always followed by noun. The right one is experiences There was also error in using the words. It would be better if he use the word IC class instead of IC students. The student also made errors in using the to infinitive form. To would always be followed by present verb. The student ignored to-be in his sentences. The correct one should be I was proud. The student used the wrong pronoun in his sentences. He used them instead of they. The student made errors in using the words experience. He should use experience in the form of noun because many is always followed by noun. There was a tense shifting in the sentence. She changed the tense from present into present perfect. The correct verb form should be I never get. The student should use the verb-ing form after the word satisfy. The correct one should be makes me satisfy becoming an IC student.

3 3. And it has become my unforgettable moment Those projects taught me how to be respectful with our environment. 5. That project makes me excited and I want to do that again when I have a chance. 6. It was so much fun and there were much lesson that I got, how to work in a group. 7. I hope I can get more experiences which more challenging in the upper semester. 1. I d like to tell you about pleasant things that I experienced as an IC students The second thing is when we are all prepared for the welcome party. There was a tense shifting in the sentence. She changed the tense from present into present perfect. The correct verb form should be and it becomes my unforgettable moment. The student should use to instead of with after the word respectful. There was a tense shifting. On the previous sentence, the student used past tense. The correct one should be those project made me excited and I wanted to do that again when I had a chance.. The student used the wrong term of many and much. Lesson is a countable noun, he should use many lessons instead of much lesson. The student ignored to-be in his sentences. The correct one should be experiences which are more challenging in the upper semester. The use of plural form is not needed here. The right answer should be as an IC student because article an is always followed by singular noun. The right one is I experienced as an IC student. The student wrote the wrong form of present continuous tense. She should write preparing instead of prepared.

4 The first briefing we discussed about the purpose of joining the welcome party and we were prepared for the group performances. 4. There was singing group, dancing group, drama group, and video group. 5. I had to stay in campus more longer for do the singing exercise. The student wrote the wrong form of past continuous tense. She should write preparing instead of prepared. The student use the wrong term of to be. Instead of was, she should have written were. She used the wrong form of comparative. She did not need to add more when the adjective is only one syllable. The correct one is I had to stay in campus longer She made errors in using the word for where it should be followed by verb-ing. The right one is for doing the singing exercise. 6. Now, the IC classes is almost end. She used the wrong form of to-be. After the plural noun, she should use are instead of is. 1. As I was the first semester student of FKIP PSP Bhs Inggris, I had to take IC classes as a starter. 2. IC classes were covered some regular classes IC interest group classes, which I took story telling for it, and also some practicum classes include the workbook classes and LMM classes. 3. First, I was happy that I could met a lot of new friends. The student used the wrong article. She should use the instead of a. There was a tense shifting. On the previous sentence, the student used past tense, but then she used present tense. The correct one should be included. The student wrote the wrong term of modals. She put past verb after the modal. The right answer is I could meet a lot of new friends..

5 4. They were really good friends and I could get along very well with them but not all of them. 5. The lecturer were cool, they were so kind and patiend and they were also really fun. 6. They knew every way to kept us awake in IC classes That is all that I can share about my unforgettable memory of IC I hope that I could done everything well this semester And for the lecturers, I just want to say sorry if I did mistakes in every single way. 1. The first of all, I like to studying here because I love English so and at first time I thought that the people who can speak English are amazing and cool. 2. It s talk about basic in English, we are learning about grammar, vocab, and many more. The student picked the wrong word. It would be better if she used even though. The students did not write the correct noun. She should use the plural form of the noun. The right one is the lecturers were cool. The student also made errors in using the to infinitive form. To would always be followed by present verb. There was a tense shifting in the sentence. She changed the tense from past into present. The correct verb form should be that was all that. The student wrote the wrong term of modals. The right answer should be I could do everything. The wrong form of conditional sentences. The right one should be if I do errors. The student made errors in using the to infinitive form. To would always be followed by present verb. The student wrote the wrong form of present continuous tense. She should write talking instead of talk.

6 3. The hardest part when I must studying the grammar. 4. Because at first when I was in junior high school I really hate English because the teacher was so killer. 5. From this, I really have a true friends who can accept me whoever I am I also have a best lecturers who teaches me with theirs patient so I can learn English better. The student ignored to-be in his sentences. The correct one should the hardest part was when I. The student wrote the wrong term of modals. The right answer should be I must study the grammar. She picked the wrong word. It would be better if she used mean. The student used the article wrongly. She should not add a in plural noun. The correct one should be i really have true friends. The student used the article wrongly. She should not add a in plural noun. The correct one should be I also have best lecturers. She also used the wrong form of present tense. When the subject was plural, it was not needed to add s/es to the verb. The correct one should be best lecturers who teach me. The use of theirs was also wrong. She should write the possessive adjective form instead of the possessive pronoun. The right answer should be me with their patient.

7 7. And now I always get practice in speaking with my little sister and my cousins who really likes speak in English The best part s when I tried to help the poor family to taught English It is all about college student who has a new beginning in next step after finished a senior high school. 2. my name is Sheren. And I was a college student in an English Department. I was in the first semester of this college. I join the class which calls IC classes. 3. Whether you like or don t like with your partner. She used the wrong form of present tense. When the subject was plural, it was not needed to add s/es to the verb. The correct one should be my cousins who really like. She also write the wrong term of like. She should add ing to the verb or to before the verb. The correct one should be my cousins who really likes speaking in English. The student made errors in using the to infinitive form. To would always be followed by present verb. The correct one should be the poor family to teach English. The student should use the verb-ing form after the word after. The correct one should be in next step after finishing. There was a tense shifting in her sentence. At first she used present tense but in the following sentence she used past tense. The right one is And I am a college student in an English Department. I am in the first semester of this college. She used the wrong form of passive. The right one is the class which is called IC classes It would be better if she did not add the auxiliary verb. The correct one should be whether you like or not

8 6 4. Not depend on someone s work or think, but yours truly. 1. My name is Bayu Satya Permana, I m joining in English Department student since Actually I must joined the IC classes at the first semester. 3. When I was joining IC, I met a few friends and I learned how about to make a good relationship with my new friends. 4. If we will want to know about friends, we must meet him or her more intensive. 5. Because, nobody s know about his or her feel about us. 6. Sometimes, she will be a good friends for me, but now, she being my enemy because she never told to me what her problem about me. The student made errors in using the words think. She should use think in the form of. The right one is thinking. The tense used was wrong. The student should use present perfect continuous. The right one is i have been joining in English Department The student wrote the wrong term of modals. It would be better if the student did not add the word about. The student used the conditional sentence form wrongly. He should not add modals after if. The right one is if we want to know about friends. He also made errors in using the words intensive. He should use intensive in the form of adverb. The right one is intensively. He also made errors in using the words feel. He should use feel in the form of noun. The right one is feeling. He used the wrong form of singular-plural form. He should not add s after the article a. The right one is she will be a good friend.

9 7. At the first semester in my class, I haven t got a new friends From this moment, we re having a like an organization. 9. She always told to everyone about me and her which not true. 1. What you get in school, you will get it again in IC Not only that, in IC, much experience, like in every party which held by IC, I find something new. v He ignored to-be in his sentence. The right one is she is being my enemy. There was a tense shifting in his sentence. He changed the tense from present into past. The right one is she never tells The student used the wrong tense. It would be better if he used past tense instead of present perfect because there was an exact time. The right one is I did not get. He also used the wrong form of article. He should not add the article a when the subject was plural. The right one is i did not get new friends. The students should not add the article before the word like. The student used the wrong tense. He should use present tense instead of past tense. The right one is she always tells to everyone. The student ignored to-be in his sentences. The correct one should be which is not true. The student used the wrong tense. It would be better if he used present perfect. The right one is what you have gotten in school. The student should use many instead of much because experience is a countable noun. The right one is in IC, many experiences.

10 I proud to be English Department student in Widya Mandala. 1. It is about what my feelings are when I became IC student until this final exam. 2. Back to the past, when I become a student university I had this PPK, one day fun, welcome party, etc. 3. It was fun that I did not realized that IC is done. 4. There is so much party in IC and I love party, maybe I will join the next year party. The student ignored to-be in his sentences. The correct one should be I am proud to be. The student ignored the article in his sentences. The correct one should be I am proud to be an English Department. The student ignored the article in his sentences. The correct one should I became an IC student. It would be better if the student used past tense because the situation is in the past. The right one is when i became. The student should write university student instead of student university. The student used the negative form of past tense wrongly. The correct answer should be I did not realize. There was also a tense shifting in his sentence. The correct one should be IC was done. The student used the plural form wrongly. The right answer should be There are so many parties. 5. Although I am not IC student anymore. The student ignored the article in his sentences. The correct one should be I am not an IC student.

11 But the most exciting part of a party that if you become one who doing it and become the comitte. 7. I have seen a lot of MC but I never became one. The student ignored to-be in his sentences. The correct one should be the most exciting part of a party is that and one who is doing it. There was a tense shifting in his sentence. At first he used the present perfect, but he changed it into past tense. The right one should be i have never become one. 1. How I must learnt so hard. The student wrote the wrong term of modals. The right one is how i must learn. 2. I must attended. The student wrote the wrong term of modals. The right one is I must attend. 3. About welcome party, hallowen party until a December IC party. C class very interesting. 4. So I tried to understand and tried learn more hard. 5. All of them my friend when we belong in PPK groups. But I and Putri in IC B. Tabbie and Widya in IC A. And Kezia IC C. The student ignored to-be in his sentences. The correct one should be C class was very interesting. The student should not add the word tried. The student used the comparative form wrongly. The right one should be harder because we could directly add er to the one syllable noun. The student did not add s in the noun. She should write my friends when we belong.

12 10 The student ignored to-be in his sentences. The correct one should be All of them are my friends when we belong in PPK groups. But I and Putri are in IC B. Tabbie and Widya are in IC A. And Kezia is IC C.. 6. Sometimes when we been lazy. The student used the wrong tense. The right one should be present tense because we know the frequency of the action. The right one is 7. He very kind, patient, and very generous. He make me enjoyed in class so we aren t bored. In him class very enjoy and practicum class. 8. I enjoying with her class so much because she always calm. She explained all pronunciation so tidy. 9. In IC party I belong to into drama class, I must wear costumes. I very excited. sometimes we are lazy. The student ignored to-be in his sentences. The correct one should be He was very kind. There was a tense shifting in his sentence. At first he used the past tense, but he changed it into present tense. The right one should be he made me enjoyed in class. The student used the wrong form of present tense. The right one is I enjoy with her class. The student ignored to-be in his sentences. The correct one should be she is always calm. The student also used the wrong adjective. It would be better if she wrote clear instead of tidy. It would be better is the student did not add into. The student ignored to-be in his sentences. The correct one should be I was very excited..

13 1. For the last six months, I an IC student of English Department. 2. The first party was hold to celebrate our coming Our second party was Halloween party. We had to costume like a ghost. 4. That s the nicest party because it was hold by IC students. 1. Want to know why? Because I ve got many extraordinary experience There s new friends, new habits, and new lifestyle. 3. First day when I followed the PPK, I know nothing. The student ignored to-be in his sentences. The correct one should be I am an IC student of English Department. The student used the form of passive wrongly. She should use the past participle form. The student should not use the word costume because costume is a noun. It will be better if she use wear costume. The student used the form of passive wrongly. She should use the past participle form. The right one is it was held. The student did not put the auxiliary verb in her sentence. The right answer should be Do you want to know why?. The student forgot to use the plural form noun after the word many. The right one should be I ve got so many extraordinary experiences. The student used the plural form wrongly. She should write There are new friends. There was a tense shifting in the student s sentence. At first she used past tense but later she changed it into present tense. The correct answer is I knew nothing.

14 12 4. But the people very friendly. They came to me and introduce her/his self. 5. The assignment that our lecturer gives are so help us to be more understand about the lesson. The student ignored to-be in his sentences. The correct one should be But the people were very friendly.. The student used the wrong form of help. She should use help in the form of adjective. The right one is so helpful for us And then, the most amazing memory of welcome party FKIP 2010 that my dance group became a winner of the most attractive nomination. 2. The program was so cool because there was an American people come to celebrate The Halloween Party together. The student ignored to-be in his sentences. The correct one should be FKIP 2010 was that my. There was a tense shifting in her sentence. At first she used past tense but later she used present tense. The right one is American people came to celebrate. 3. That was traditional cultures event. The student ignored the article in his sentences. The correct one should be that was a traditional 1. I want to told about my experience in IC. First time I saw IC is very difficult because IC is a basic for study. The student made errors in using the to infinitive form. To is followed by present verb. There was a tense shifting in his sentence. At first he used past tense but later he used present tense. The right one is I saw IC was very difficult because IC was a basic. He also did not add verb-ing after for. The right one should be a basic for studying.

15 I must told that I start in IC I feel very scared because I thing all my friends very good in English. The student wrote the wrong term of modals. The right one should be The student ignored to-be in his sentences. The correct one should be all my friends were very good. 3. We re study about English basically. The student wrote the wrong form of present continuous tense. She should write we are studying instead of we are study. 4. First time in IC B I m very interest because Mr. Yohanes very happy to touch about the material. 5. IC B class is very condusif to study English. All my friends very kind if I felt any difficult material they want to help me. 6. And the third paragraph, I bring suggest for IC please give the materi more interest so we feel interest too. 1. I chose English Department in Widya Mandala University because I liked English language and I want learn English language more seriously. 2. I liked the lesson and the lecturer who like play movie. I liked gathered some homework together, so we could study together. The student ignored to-be in his sentences. The correct one should be Mr. Yohanes was very happy. The student ignored to-be in his sentences. The correct one should be All my friends are very kind. The student made errors in using the words suggest. He should use suggestion as the form of noun not suggest. The student forgot to add to after the word want. The right one should be and I want to learn English. There was a tense shifting in her sentence. At first she used past tense but later she changed it into present tense. The right answer should be the lecturer who liked.

16 In second semester I felt it more difficult than in first semester. 4. And I thought I must more study hard in this second semester. 1. At first some of us were terrified, excited, and some was so so. 2. After that there was IC party, we all had fun and i don t think any of us were thinking of thinking the farewells we were consentrating mostly on sweet rujak, pecel, and other food and drinks that were there. 3. Time flew so fast, that i can t believe it s almost time to separate. She also write the wrong term of like. She should add ing to the verb or to before the verb. The right answers are the lecturer who liked playing movie and I liked gathering some homework. The student ignored to-be in his sentences. The correct one should be I felt it is more difficult. The student used the comparative form wrongly. The right one should be harder because we could directly add er to the one syllable noun. The student used the wrong to-be. The right one is some were so so. There was a tense shifting in the sentence. At first the student use past tense but later is was changed into present tense. The right one is i did not think. There was a tense shifting in the sentence. At first the student use past tense but later is was changed into present tense. The right one is i could not believe. 1. I can learned to practice it. The student wrote the wrong term of modals. The right one should be I can learn.

17 The lesson is not difficult enough to understand, if the lecturer can made us excited to learn their lesson. The student wrote the wrong term of modals. The right one should be the lecturer can make. 3. I can learned English more with them. The student wrote the wrong term of modals. The right one should be I can learn English. 4. Althought i said in my first opening story that i feel relly complicated, it s means about the bad and the best things that I got from the IC class. 5. IC class is the first semester for me, so whetger i felt difficult or not, it s depends on me. 6. I just can say a lot of thank to my lecturer who taught us in IC class, especially IC B and because of IC, I can joining the interest group like drama and singing. There was tense shifting in her sentence. At first she used simple past tense but later she changed it into simple present tense. The right answers should be I felt really complicated and it meant about the bad. There was tense shifting in her sentence. At first she used simple past tense but later she changed it into simple present tense. The right answers should be IC class was the first semester and it depended on me. The student wrote the wrong term of modals. The right one should be I can join. 7. I am really learn more from IC class. The student wrote the wrong form of present continuous tense. She should write I am really learning instead of I am really learn. 1. I writing about my experience when I was in IC classes. The student ignored to-be in his sentences. The correct one should be I am writing about

18 They are a kind and good teacher. The student wrote the form of plural wrongly. The right one should be good teachers. 3. When they get angry, everybody in the class will be scared of them and the lessons will be boring. But they re a good teachers, it s no doubt about it. 1. I will tell you about my experienced to be IC students. 2. I am really comfortable join this subject and I will joined this subject with my good behaviour. 3. Then if I enjoyed with something I will understand more easily than I dislike with something. The student ignored to-be in his sentences. The correct one should be the class will be scared The student should not add the article a in his sentences. The correct one should be they are good The student made errors in using the words experience. She should use experience in the form of noun because many is always followed by noun. The student also wrote the form of present continuous tense wrongly. She should add the ing to the verb. The right one should be I am really comfortable joining this subject. The student also wrote the form of present future tense wrongly. She should use the present verb not the past verb. The right one should be I will join this subject. The student used the conditional sentence wrongly. The right one should be if I enjoy with something, I will understand more easily.