3 Which sentence I is correct? The man yelled at the crowd with the mic. The man with the mic yelled at the crowd.
4 The man yelled at the crowd with the mic. The man with the mic yelled at the crowd. Why? The man, not the crowd, had the mic. The modifier, with the mic, must be placed as closely as possible to what it is intended to modify.
5 What is a Modifier? A modifier is a word or phrase that describes a particular noun or pronoun in the sentence. Examples: The yellow taxis gleam in the fall afternoon. The girl with the red hat is the one in charge. The newspaper on top of the stack is the one I avoid purchasing.
6 Misplaced Modifiers (mm) Misplaced modifiers are words that, because of awkward placement, do not describe what the writer intended them to describe. A misplaced modifier can make a sentence confusing or unintentionally funny.
7 Misplaced Modifier Examples We sold lemonade to the thirsty customers in paper cups. Were the customers in paper cups? Correct: We sold lemonade in paper cups to the thirsty customers. Rule of thumb: To avoid misplaced modifiers, place words as close as possible to what they describe.
8 Misplaced Modifier Examples I saw three bears on the way to class. Were the bears on their way to class? Correct: On the way to class, I saw three bears. She nearly combed her hair for ten minutes every night. Did she almost comb her hair but not? Correct: She combed her hair for nearly ten minutes every night. Psst! Words like almost, even, exactly, hardly, just, merely, nearly, only, scarcely, and simply should come immediately before the word they modify.
9 The following sentences have different meanings because of the placement of only. Only Kim offered me thirty dollars to wash her car. (Kim was the only person to offer thirty dollars.) Kim only offered me thirty dollars to wash her car. (Kim offered, but did not ultimately pay thirty dollars.) Kim offered me only thirty dollars to wash her car. (Kim offered thirty dollars, but I was expecting more.)
10 Checking for Misplaced Modifiers 1. Find the modifier. 2. Find the word, phrase, or clause it modifies. 3. Make sure the modifier is as close as possible to the word, phrase, or clause it modifies.
11 Correcting Misplaced Modifiers The farmer bought a bull at the auction with large horns. 1. Find the modifier. The modifier is with large horns. 2. Find the word, phrase, or clause it modifies. The word being modified is bull. 3. Make sure the modifier is as close as possible to the word being modified. Is the modifier as close as possible?
12 Nope. In this case, with large horns is not as close as possible to bull. Correct: The farmer bought a bull with long horns at the auction.
13 Dangling Modifiers (dm) A dangling modifier is a modifier that does not relate sensibly to any word in the sentence. A modifier or a modifying phrase that begins a sentence must be followed closely by the word it is meant to describe.
14 (dm) Example While driving to the vet s office, my dog jumped out of the car. Huh? Who was driving the car?
15 Correct: While I was driving to the vet s office, my dog jumped out of the car. Also correct: While driving to the vet s office, I saw my dog jump out of the car.
16 (dm) Example Asked to give an autograph, we were disappointed by the player s refusal. Who was asked to give an autograph?
17 Correct: Asked to give an autograph, the player disappointed us because he refused. Also correct: When the player was asked to give an autograph, we were disappointed that he refused.
18 Tips for Spotting Dangling Modifiers Dangling modifiers almost always include action verbs. In the previous examples, one modifier includes the word driving, and the other includes the verb asked. Not all dangling modifiers occur at the beginnings of sentences, but many of them do.
19 How to Check for Dangling Modifiers 1. Find the modifier. 2. Find the word, phrase, or clause it modifies. 3. Make sure the modifier is as close as possible to the word, phrase, or clause it modifies. 4. If the modifier has nothing to modify, add or change words so that it does.
20 (dm) Example While walking home, a car honked at me.
21 While walking home, a car honked at me. Step one: Find the modifier. The modifier is while walking home. Step two: Find the word, phrase, or clause it modifies. The modifier cannot logically modify a car. Step three: Give the modifier something to modify. Who or what can it modify?
22 Correct: While I was walking home, a car honked at me. In this case, it would be appropriate to insert I for the modifier to modify.
24 In the following pairs, one sentence is correct, and the other sentence has a misplaced or dangling modifier. A) Biking down the hill, my tire deflated. B) As I was biking down the hill, my tire deflated.
25 A) Biking down the hill, my tire deflated. B) As I biked down the hill, my tire deflated. Why? Answer A is incorrect because my tire was not biking down the hill.
26 In the following pairs, one sentence is correct and the other sentence has a misplaced or a dangling modifier. A) Jack bought a spotted horse for his sister named Polka Dot. B) Jack bought a spotted horse named Polka Dot for his sister.
27 A) Jack bought a spotted horse for his sister named Polka Dot. B) Jack bought a spotted horse named Polka Dot for his sister. Why? Answer A is incorrect. The horse, not Jack s sister, was named Polka Dot.
28 The following has a misplaced or dangling modifier. Identify and fix the error. I saw a huge lizard dropping off the ferrets at the vet s office this morning.
29 Dropping off the ferrets at the vet s office this morning, I saw a huge lizard. Why? The huge lizard was not dropping off the ferrets. I was dropping off the ferrets.
30 The following has a misplaced or dangling modifier. Identify and fix the error. Surfing this weekend, a shark ate my brother nearly.
31 Surfing this weekend, my brother was nearly eaten by a shark. Why? My brother was surfing, not the shark, and nearly is an adverb that must be closer to the verb.
32 These Dirty Dozen Workshops are also available online at the Writing Center s website in two exciting formats: Workshop Presentation PDFs Under Handouts, we have posted pdfs of the PowerPoint presentations we use in these workshops. New! Quick & Dirty Dozen Videos We have been making short videos that recap each workshop in five minutes or less. For appointments, resources, handouts and more, visit:
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34 While attending college, some of my instructors graded my papers very harshly. I remember one English teacher who gave a failing grade to any essay by a student with more than three spelling errors. I ve always had trouble with spelling, and whenever writing compositions in class, my palms would sweat. I was supposed to look up any word in the dictionary that was misspelled, but I couldn t always find the words I needed because, of course, I didn t know how to spell them in the first place. However, after buying an electronic spelling dictionary, my composition grades improved. When using the electronic dictionary, even incorrectly spelled entries would give me the correctly spelled word. I would recommend using an electronic dictionary to any student in any class with a spelling problem.
35 While attending college, some of my instructors graded my papers very harshly. I remember one English teacher who gave a failing grade to any essay by a student with more than three spelling errors. I ve always had trouble with spelling, and whenever writing compositions in class, my palms would sweat. I was supposed to look up any word in the dictionary that was misspelled, but I couldn t always find the words I needed because, of course, I didn t know how to spell them in the first place. However, after buying an electronic spelling dictionary, my composition grades improved. When using the electronic dictionary, even incorrectly spelled entries would give me the correctly spelled word. I would recommend using an electronic dictionary to any student in any class with a spelling problem.
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