1 Writing = A Dialogue You come late. When you arrive, others have long preceded you, and they are engaged in a heated discussion, a discussion too heated for them to pause and tell you exactly what it is about. You listen for a while, until you decide that you have caught the tenor of the argument; then you put in your oar. Someone answers, you answer him; another comes to your defense; another aligns himself against you. The hour grows late, you must depart. And you do depart, with the discussion still vigorously in progress. - Kenneth Burke Part I. They Say The simplest template for academic writing is this one: They say ; I say. In other words, writing all writing is about listening to others, summarizing their views, and responding with your own idea. It s about more than asserting your own position it s about placing that position within the conversation that s already been taking place. The conversation doesn t have to be a response to great authors or experts or some well-known person it can be a response to some interior struggle, or to your sister. But there s got to be some tension: When I was a kid, I thought that all people could succeed if they just tried hard enough. The older I get, though, the more I see that our chances for success are greatly restricted by our location, our upbringing, and the institutions we participate in. The goal of writing like this is NOT to play it safe. Good persuasive writing is not about repeating the truths that are already accepted by your audience; instead, persuasive writing can only have a purpose if it challenges some belief your readers hold. However, this expectation doesn t mean that you have to make ridiculous claims and in some cases, agreement can be a part of persuasive writing, if you have something NEW to add to the accepted view: Her argument that is supported by new research/my own experience/changing attitudes that. This structure works well for academic writing, but it s not only about the academy it s also a good model that helps us realize we need to listen to others different from us and find ways of engaging with them thoughtfully and respectfully. According to Graff and Birkenstein, argumentative writing needs to identify WHO it s responding to, early in the writing: To keep an audience engaged, a writer needs to explain what he or she is responding to either before offering that response or, at least, very early in the discussion. Delaying this explanation for more than one or two paragraphs in a very short essay, three or four pages in a longer one, or more than ten or so pages in a book-length text, reverses the natural order in which readers process material (18). So, start with what they say. (Then follow up with what an indication of what you say what you intend to ADD to the topic. Otherwise it feels like you re just going to deliver the party line.)
2 An illustrative quotation, a surprising fact/statistic, a personal experience can work as a way of introducing what they say, as long as it illustrates the view that you re addressing. Templates for introducing the standard view Americans today tend to believe that. Conventional wisdom is that. The standard way of thinking about is that. My whole life I have heard it said that. Many people have agreed with, who claims that. Presenting the standard view as your own I ve always believed that. When I was a child, I used to believe that. Presenting an argument that is often implied Although none of them have ever said so directly, my teachers have often given me the impression that Though they may not admit it, often take for granted that. Setting up sides of an issue In discussions of, one controversial aspect has been. On the one hand, argues. On the other hand, suggests that. [Because of,] My view is. When it comes to the topic of, most of us agree that. But the agreement usually ends when we reach the question of. While some believe that, others feel that. As you write, you should return to the view that you re responding to, which helps maintain a sense of purpose and significance for the writing. And it helps your readers see that you re honestly responding rather than just presenting information about a topic. Summarizing the positions of others If you do an honest job of summarizing, your reader shouldn t be able to tell whether you agree or disagree with the author s position. Words to show that the author is making a claim: argue, assert, believe, claim, emphasize, insist, observe, suggest Words to show that the author agrees with someone else s idea: acknowledge, admire, agree, corroborate, endorse, extol, praise, do not deny, verify Words to show questioning or disagreement: complain, complicate, contend, contradict, deny, disavow, refute, challenge, question, Words to show that the author is making a recommendation: advocate, call for, demand, encourage, implore, plead, urge, warn For example, in most persuasive writing, the authors aren t just talking about an idea. Instead, you might summarize by writing that Jones disagrees with authorities on by providing evidence to
3 support his claim that, and he wants to encourage his readers to as a result of his assertions. Crafting quotations to support your argument Avoid leaving out details for your reader by building quotation sandwiches the top slice gives the reader information to understand the quote, the middle part IS the quote, and the bottom slice helps the reader understand how the quotation is relevant to your own ideas. Templates for setting up and following up on quotations. Basically, X is saying. In other words, X believes. In making this comment, X argues that. Part II. I Say Okay, so you ve figured out how to fairly restate what somebody else is saying. But that s just the beginning. For persuasive writing, you also want to be able to add something to the conversation. There are three basic ways to respond: I agree. I disagree. I both agree and disagree. Merely agreeing, or merely disagreeing, is not enough. You ve also got to say why it matters. Templates for disagreeing: I think X is mistaken because she overlooks. X s claim that rests upon the questionable assumption that. In light of recent research showing, I disagree with X that. X contradicts himself. On one hand he seems to suggest that while at the same time he also asserts that. By focusing on, X distracts from the real problem of. Templates for agreeing I agree with X that because my own experience confirms it. Recent studies about support X s point that. X s writing about helps to shed light on the difficult/unrelated topic of. Since I agree with X that, we need to reassess the popular belief that. Most persuasive writing, then, walks a line between texts that line up with the author s viewpoint and those which complicate or contradict it. Usually, agreeing with some perspective also means disagreeing with some other way of looking at things. Templates for agreeing and disagreeing Although I disagree with X s main point, I concede that his point about is persuasive.
4 Although I agree with X up to a point, I cannot accept her overall point that. Whereas X provides ample evidence that, X and Z s research on convinces me that instead. A template for speculative exploration I have mixed feelings about the text. On one hand, I agree with X that. On the other hand, I find his claim that is problematic. Placing yourself clearly in the writing The danger of incorporating the ideas of other writers is that it can become hard for readers to tell where your summary of others ideas ends and your own stance begins. As a result, it s important for you to provide markers that help to indicate where you are beginning your own argument. Templates for marking off your own claims My own view, however, is that. I believe, as X may not, that. X s assertion that does not fit the facts. Rather, the evidence shows that. [In this sentence you re using a claim to distinguish your ideas from source X, and then you re letting the evidence establish your perspective.] Acknowledging naysayers You build credibility by acknowledging rather than dismissing or ignoring the beliefs of your audience. Those beliefs are sometimes counterarguments, and if you don t address counterarguments then you run the risk of being seen as close-minded. Templates for introducting counterarguments At this point I want to raise some objections inspired by the skeptic in me. She feels that I have been ignoring the issue of., she says to me,. Some readers, however, may challenge my view that. After all, many believe that. In truth, my argument about does seem to ignore. But is my idea realistic? What are the chances of it actually being adopted? Does the evidence I ve provided compellingly show -? Templates for introducing counterarguments held by a specific group of people (liberals, Christians, capitalists) Here many feminists may object that. Biologists, of course, may dispute my claim that. Though not all Christians think alike, a fairly common perspective they hold, in opposition to my own, may be that. Though labeling groups introduces a level of generalization that may be uncomfortable, it also allows for the possibility of connecting your ideas to the larger interaction of ideas. The third example shows a way to avoid overgeneralization while still ascribing a view to a certain group.
5 Answering objections It s not enough just to acknowledge the views of others you also need to answer them. And you need to answer them fairly, without mocking or oversimplifying. That s just wrong is not is not backed up with any research or logic or example. Although I admit that, I still maintain that since. Proponents are right to point out that. But they exaggerate/misrepresent the evidence when they say. While it is true that, this fact does not necessarily cause/indicate/show that. What if you discover that a counterargument is more persuasive than your stance? Well, this discovery probably means you need to do some major revision. One goal of writing is to help you extend your own thinking, and a fair investigation of the evidence may mean that you learn something new that changes your view. That s not a bad thing. Establishing significance If it isn t clear why your audience should care about your writing, they probably won t. Since you re writing to persuade someone to revisit their position on some topic, one of the easy ways to help a reader see the significance of your writing is by helping them see how your claim may differ from their own. If you re writing about something that everyone already accepts, there s not much reason to be writing about it. A thesis statement is not a bad place to establish significance by identifying the tension between a group s current view and the position that you advocate. used to think that. But a shifting focus on has meant that. This position challenges the work of critics who have assumed that. Recent studies shed new light on, which previous studies had not addressed. If sports enthusiasts stopped to think about it, they might simply assume that most athletes. However, new research/events show that. At first glance teenagers might say. But on closer inspection they might realize. In addition to identifying which groups of people might care about the topic, you probably also want to explain why they should care. matters because. Although may seem unimportant, it is a crucial factor in our society s investigation of. My discussion of is in fact addressing the larger matter of.
6 Hey, you might even be able to say that a good thesis statement generally identifies your position in relationship to other positions and then explains why your position on the topic matters. To clarify and elaborate You use these because, no matter how clear your argument, sometimes readers will end up on a sideroad. Generally writers assume that the reader is more familiar with the topic than he or she really is. In other words,. What really means is that. To put it another way,. Template to prevent misunderstanding My point is not that we should, but that we should. Template to provide a roadmap to your structure The first section provides while the second section. Having just argued that, let us now turn our attention to. Given this information about we can now begin to investigate the dispute in more detail. Thus, the position of is. In contrast, the position of is. Moving from general claims to specific examples For example,., for instance, shows that. provides a specific illustration of. The words that help you show these connections are called transitions. The most common relationships indicated by transitions are Addition: also, and, besides, additionally Exemplification: after all, for example, to illustrate, specifically Elaboration: by extension, that is, to put it another way, ultimately Comparison: along the same lines, likewise, similarly Contrast: on the other hand, although, but, in contrast, despite the fact that, however, nonetheless Cause and effect: as a result, because, since, so, then, therefore, thus Concession: admittedly, although it is true, granted, of course Conclusion: in short, in sum, to sum up, overall, ultimately
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